[General] boost sales

[vil]

Dear teachers,

Would you be kind enough to tell me whether the following sentence sounds good in the contemporary English?

If you boost sales considerably your commission could be increased by at least 2%.

Thanks for your efforts.

Regards,

V.

 

[billmcd]

Dear teachers,

Would you be kind enough to tell me whether the following sentence sounds good in the contemporary English?

If you boost sales considerably your commission could be increased by at least 2%.

Thanks for your efforts.

Regards,

V.

Yes, it's fine.