Bosom Friend...

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NewHope

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A poem for a classic Chinese line

Worry not - ahead of the road
There be - your bosom friend
For your prestige
Sparkles the world

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Any comment appreciated.
 

Tdol

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I'd change 'there be' to 'there is' and 'of'to 'on'. ;-)
 
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