both to grow and learn

robin lee

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Joined
Oct 28, 2009
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Other
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Chinese
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China
Current Location
Hong Kong
Is this sentence correct?

The past two years working in this company have been rewarding as they are opportunities both to grow and learn.
 

tedmc

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Apr 16, 2014
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Interested in Language
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Chinese
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Malaysia
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Malaysia
I would write it this way:
The past two years working in this company have been rewarding as [STRIKE]they are[/STRIKE] I have had the opportunities both to learn and grow [STRIKE]and learn[/STRIKE].
 
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