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ali_dd

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Is the use of "both" in the following sentences correct grammatically and conceptually? If it is not , kindly suggest ways to make it clearer.

In other words, both tip leakage flow and endwall boundary layer flow have a high effect on the total pressure drop across the turbine at high flow coefficients.
 

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"A high effect" doesn't work. Do you mean a significant ​effect?
 

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These are very technical questions. We're a language discussion forum. If you want advanced scientific proofreading, you'd be better off getting a specialist proofreader.
 
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