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madunix

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I made a business card for me (personal) as Financial advisor , inside the card I have written the following, would you agree with it?


First Name Family Name (Financial advisor)
SECURITIES DEPOSITORY
Regulatory compliance
CLEARING and SETTLEMENT
MARKET REGULATION
RISK MANAGEMENT
CAPITAL MARKETS
STRATEGY
 

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It is rather a lot.
 

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Why is the capitalization inconsistent? Why are these words in all capitals anyway? It makes it difficult to read.
 

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I made a business card for me (personal) as Financial advisor , inside the card I have written the following, would you agree with it?


First Name Family Name (Financial advisor)
SECURITIES DEPOSITORY (Can people leave money and other securities with you? Isn't this a function of a bank?)
Regulatory compliance
CLEARING and SETTLEMENT
MARKET REGULATION (This seems to be what governments do)
RISK MANAGEMENT
CAPITAL MARKETS
STRATEGY
Without knowing more about your particular business, I would lay the card out this way -

Joe Smith
Regulatory Compliance & Risk Management Specialist
2202 Main Street
Yourcity
Tel: 343-445-4545
jsmith@ abc.com
 

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Note that it's a "business card" (two words), not "businesscard" as you wrote in your title.
 

Tdol

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Why is the capitalization inconsistent? Why are these words in all capitals anyway? It makes it difficult to read.

Good point- writing in capitals is not helpful.
 
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