Butterfly

[RonBee]

Butterfly

The sun glistens off of the drops of dew
On the blades of grass.
I sun myself, feeling
The warmth on my skin,
Feeling my juices flowing
As I get ready to fly.
I turn and I run into the wind.
I spread my wings. Like a butterfly.
I leap and I am airborne,
Soaring thru the sky.
Soon I am soaring over the rooftops
Flying thru the sunrays,
Floating on the wind.





12/30/98

 

[sanny]

I leap and I am airborne,

what does that mean?

 

[Tdol]

It means 'I jump and I am flying'. ;-)

 

[RonBee]

What Tdol said. :wink:

Welcome to the forum! :hi:

And thanks for reading my poem.

:smilecol:

 

[sanny]

I like your poem, it's nice!
I've also written a poem...

How to see

A little bee
just to see
A little bee
on my knee
A little bee
just for me
A little bee
to the tea
A little bee
just to share
and to fly through the air
He does not see
how people can be
warm and nice
or cold as ice
But you know
how to go
be warm and nice
you'll sing in paradise

Do you like it?

 

[sanny]

Oh oeps, I wrote 'A little bee, to the tea'
That must be 'A little bee, for the tea'

 

[Lini]

I wish I could make such a poem too... but I'm not very good at that.
Does anyone have tips for me to practice some more and maybe there will be a poem on this forum that I wrote...

kisskiss

 

[RonBee]

A little bee having tea? With me? :wink:

I like that. It rhymes. :wink:

(If you want to change something in a post you can use the "Edit" function.)

 

[sanny]

Thanks a lot RonBee, it didn't occur to me that half your name is in it to, so it is a little bit written for you!

(and thanks for the 'Edit' tip!)

 

[Beeuurkes]

The sun glistens off of the drops of dew
On the blades of grass.
I sun myself, feeling
The warmth on my skin,
Feeling my juices flowing
As I get ready to fly.
I turn and I run into the wind.
I spread my wings. Like a butterfly.
I leap and I am airborne,
Soaring thru the sky.
Soon I am soaring over the rooftops
Flying thru the sunrays,
Floating on the wind.

I really love that one. :up:

 

[Beeuurkes]

I wish I could make such a poem too... but I'm not very good at that.
Does anyone have tips for me to practice some more and maybe there will be a poem on this forum that I wrote...

I wish you will manage.
Simply listen to your heart and let the words playing in your head.
I am impatient to read yours.

 

[Lini]

thanks for your answer... if I make a poem and wishes to let it read to others I will give it to you!

 

[Beeuurkes]

I am very touched, Lini. Trust yourself.

 

[RonBee]

thanks for your answer... if I make a poem and wishes to let it read to others I will give it to you!

Just like a little singing bird,
A poem wants to be heard.



(Say: "If I write a poem and wish to read it to others....")

 

[sanny]

Just like a little singing bird,
A poem wants to be heard.

isn't this an expression? :roll:

 

[sanny]

birds and the bees,
they're singing in the trees.

 

[sanny]

a warm summer night
fishing in the dark moon light

 

[sanny]

why is the sun as hot
like a little warm spot
in the blue sky
so high
it catches the eye
warm in the sun
sunbathe for fun
run
over the green, green grass
a thick vegetable mass
jump in the air
together as a pair
fall on the ground
spin around
be mild
be thrilled!

 

[RonBee]

Just like a little singing bird,
A poem wants to be heard.

isn't this an expression? :roll:

I made that up. Do you like it?

 

[broken heart]

nice , but i see diffcult words