bosun
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 9, 2005
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- Korean
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- South Korea
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- South Korea
I am trying to write a personal statement and if you see any problems in the following sentences, can I have your comments?
1. I kept asking questions about how and why this crisis( I mean financial crisis in 2009) could affect so many people's lives. By solving these questions one by one, I greatly enjoyed the course ( I mean economics).
2. Economics and management will help and teach me how to make and carry out decisions. It will also help me develop my ability to think creativelly and logically.
1. I kept asking questions about how and why this crisis( I mean financial crisis in 2009) could affect so many people's lives. By solving these questions one by one, I greatly enjoyed the course ( I mean economics).
2. Economics and management will help and teach me how to make and carry out decisions. It will also help me develop my ability to think creativelly and logically.