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[emul]

My exciting holiday​

My exciting holiday is when i was in Macedonia.
I went in last July, i went with my fiance, we stayed for to weeks in a hotel. In first week we went in Struga, there was looks beautiful But next week we went in Ohri when looks was the more beautiful than Struga. Same in the Struga we stayed in Hotel, but his beautiful were that it’s near the beach. From my window to hotel room’s I could see a wonderful views, beach, leak etc. In the morning we walked to the beach around the lake accompanied by sun rays and lakes waves melody and than we went sunbathing and sometimes swimming. In the evening we went for the lunch in another restaurant where the cooked very tasty fish so we liked very much it. Later we went in a pub to listening a music and dance.
So this was my exciting holiday where I enjoyed very much indeed but I hope that next vacation will pass even better than this holiday.

 

[billmcd]

My Exciting Holiday
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So this was my exciting holiday[STRIKE] where [/STRIKE] that I enjoyed very much indeed, but I hope that next vacation will pass even better than this holiday.

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