can somebody check my mistakes

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happys82

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[FONT=&quot]1.In addition, students are given detailed information on related issues during the Civil Defence Week.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]2.Meals, which are prepared during I and II term, are determined with club students.[/FONT](cooking club)
3. Weekend sports contribute to students’ social development.
[FONT=&quot]We give students the opportunity to participate in sports and social activities through the winter schools in the autumn term. [/FONT]
 

euncu

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***neither a teacher nor a native-speaker***

[FONT=&quot]1. In addition, the students are given detailed information on t[/FONT][FONT=&quot][/FONT][FONT=&quot]he r[/FONT][FONT=&quot]elated issues during the Civil Defence Week.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]2. T[/FONT][FONT=&quot]he [/FONT][FONT=&quot]meals, which are prepared during I and II (I'd prefer; the first and the second) term, are determined with [/FONT][FONT=&quot]t[/FONT][FONT=&quot]he [/FONT][FONT=&quot]club students.[/FONT]([FONT=&quot]T[/FONT][FONT=&quot]he [/FONT]cooking club)
3. Weekend sports contribute to students’ social development.(If it is not a general statement, then put the definite article before weekend and students)

[FONT=&quot]We give students the opportunity( maybe not just giving opportunity but urging or endorsing as well) to participate in sports and social activities through the winter schools in the autumn term. [/FONT]
 

billmcd

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The articles "the" really aren't necessary in this notice since the notice is referring to the nouns in general terms.
 
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