Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

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scott833

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1) I did the assignment in a rush, that is why there are many mistakes.
2) Please don't do your assignment in a hurry.
3) With the little amont of experience that you gained, you will know what to expect already when you start working.
 

hope2010

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I did the assignment in a rush;that is why there are many mistakes.

(Correct but notice the change in punctuation).

2) Please don't do your assignment in a hurry. sounds ok.

3) With the little amont of experience that you gained, you will know what to expect already when you start working.

I would say: From the little experience that you have gained, you will already know what to expect when you start working.
 

tedtmc

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will already know what to expect

I suggest 'would know what to expect'.

not a teacher
 
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