Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

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scott833

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1) My job responsibility is to link up Malaysian students with foreign students.
2) I want to link up/connect the two of them.
 

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1) My job responsibility is to link up Malaysian students with foreign students.
2) I want to link up/connect the two of them.

What do you mean by 'link/connect up'?
How do you 'link up' student A with student B?

physical link-up with cables? facilitate communication? foster interaction?
 

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1) My job responsibility is to link up Malaysian students with foreign students. :tick:
2) I want to link up the two groups. :tick:
3) I want to bring the two groups together. :tick:

"connect" is not a good verb here.
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