[Grammar] Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

[scott833]

1) The letter S represent you in the book.
2) You are represented by the letter S in the game, because your name start with the letter S.
3) The stone pathway with the stone placed slightly apart from each other.
4) It is a stone pathway/walkway with the flagstone slightly apart from each other. ( What i meant to say is the stone pathway which has flagstone which is not attach to one another but is slightly apart from each other.)

 

[tedtmc]

1) The letter 'S' represents you in the book.
2) You are represented by the letter 'S' in the game,(delete) because your name starts with the letter 'S'.
3) The stone pathway [STRIKE]with the[/STRIKE] is paved with stones [STRIKE]placed slightly apart from each other[/STRIKE] closely spaced.

4) It is a stone pathway/walkway with the flagstone slightly apart from each other. ( What i meant to say is the stone pathway which has flagstone which is not attach to one another but is slightly apart from each other.) as #3

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