Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

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scott833

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1) His giving in to their demand is a symbolic gesture that his position is weakening as the leader of the team.
2) His compliance to their demand is a sign that his position as leader of the team has weakened.
3) His backing down is an implicit that his position is weakening as a leader.
 

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1) His giving in to their demand is a symbolic gesture that his position is weakening as the leader of the team.
2) His compliance [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] with their demand is a sign that his position as leader of the team has weakened.
3) His backing down is an implicit sign that his position is weakening as a leader.


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