Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

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scott833

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1) During sales season, stores will arrange their product in a way that make customer think that everything in their stores are cheap and affordable.
2) During sales season, stores will arrange their product in a way that create an illusion/impression that cheap and affordable.
3) During sales season, stores will arrange their product in a way that arouse/stimulate the feeling the affordability and cheapness in customer towards their product.
 

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Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences? 1

Please use distinct titles for distinct requests; another Moderator may well delete some of your posts as duplicates. If so, post them again with titles that identify them.

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