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flower 5

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I can not beleive that the spring vocation is ended since i waited a long time and i didn't have much time to realise all my plans. During ,the vocation happened some things i enjoy them .However i wasn't expected .


I had a nice week ,expect the hours when i had to work,because i didn't have to worry about the assignments,and that i devoted my time to other activities .Of course after all ,i needed to relax to keep my energy up for the next days
 

Anglika

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I can not beleive that the spring vocation is ended since i waited a long time and i didn't have much time to realise all my plans. During ,the vocation happened some things i enjoy them .However i wasn't expected .


I had a nice week ,expect the hours when i had to work,because i didn't have to worry about the assignments,and that i devoted my time to other activities .Of course after all ,i needed to relax to keep my energy up for the next days

Personal pronoun "I" = always capital letter.
Vocation = a strong feeling of suitability for a particular career or occupation
Expect = regard as likely to happen.

One space AFTER the punctuation, like this.

Try a revise and repost.
 

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Say:
I cannot believe that spring vacation is over.
:)
 
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