Can you help??...Please

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I hate My English

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Get over your fear of texting her first, The adrenaline rush you got is priceless
is this statement sounds right?!!Sorry, I'm not a native speaker...:((
 

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It sounds a bit confused to me- the first part sounds negative, but an adrenaline rush is a good feeling.
 

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It should be two sentences, not one. You need a period at the end of each sentence. Your tenses seem to conflict. You are telling someone to get over his fear and then you are referring to an adrenaline rush that happened in the past.
 
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