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francycham

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I want write a letter to my manager saying that we have got additional income by charging surcharges from the customers- please see below.

Sir,

Please find enclosed list of traffic fines we charged with 50% surcharge from various customers from January 2010 till now. We have gained total USD. 2, 700.00 surcharges as an additional income for the company, and also note that we did not absorb any traffic fines as our company expense during this time. This achievement due to my continues effort and timely action/ advise to the respective customers.

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I want write a letter to my manager saying that we have got additional income by charging surcharges from the customers- please see below.

Sir,


Please find the enclosed list of traffic fines. These traffic fines were administered with a 50% surcharge to [STRIKE]various[/STRIKE] customers during the January-June 2010 period. [STRIKE]till now[/STRIKE]. We have gained a total of $2,700.00 USD in surcharges. These funds will serve as additional income for the company. Please note that the company did not incur any expenses relating to traffic fines during this period. This achievement is partly due to my proactive efforts in ensuring that our customers are properly notified.
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