[General] Can you tell me if the structure of my sentences are correct?

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Khloe

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I am a Technical Management major. More importantly, I am a mother of four boys and three girls. My interests are finishing my bachelors degree in a timely manner, while maintaining my household. I am excited about what the class will teach me about criminal justice. In my family there are few police officers and sheriffs, so this will be interesting.
 

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I am a Technical Management major. More importantly, I am a mother of four boys and three girls. My interests are finishing my bachelors degree in a timely manner, while maintaining my household. I am excited about what the class will teach me about criminal justice. In my family there are a few police officers and sheriffs, so this will be interesting.
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