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AirbusA321

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Is this text okay or does it need improvement?

European car makers must be terrified when having a look on the streets of Manila. Millions of Nissans, Kias and Toyotas are driving around there but hardly any Mercedeses or VWs. The Filipinos obviously don't like their cars and prefer Asian products.
 
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jutfrank

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It could be improved in many ways. Here are some errors.

Sentence 1
terrified
having a look


Sentence 2
Millions
driving around there
Mercedeses


Sentence 3 doesn't make sense.
 
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