Change the sequence of the deliveries with me.

[Jit833]

1) There are two deliveries drivers and one of them got a bad sequence of deliveries because the address were far as for the other driver he had a good deliveries sequence/flow because all the orders were closeby.

2) Change the sequence/flow of the deliveries with me so that you can deliver some close distance order.


Can I write the above sentences like that?

 

[probus]

These contain so many errors that they barely understandable.

1) There are two delivery drivers. One got a bad sequence of deliveries because the addresses were far apart. As for the other driver, he had a good sequence because all the orders were close by.

2) Exchange (or trade) some deliveries with me so that we will both have some nearby and some farther away.