Check my letter writing please.

[jomo27]

I'm going to ask questions to the academics in the University.

Please help me checking the mistakes.

Thanks a lot.


Dear Will,

It's been a while since I sent you the last letter. I would like to ask some questions again.

First, when do I need to apply for the BPA if I'm already sure? Or the Monash foundation course will help me do that?

Second, If I was sure to go by next year, my age would be 17 and going to 18 on that year. Do I need to stay at the Monash dorm? or any other accomodation? Or?

I think this would be enough for now.

I look forward to your response.
Thanks.

Regards,
Tom

 

[Anglika]

I'm going to ask questions to the academics in the University.

Please help me checking the mistakes.

Thanks a lot.


Dear Will,

It's been a while since I sent you the last letter. I would like to ask some questions again.

First, when do I need to apply for the BPA if I'm already sure? Or will the Monash foundation course help me do that?

Second, if I was sure to go by next year, my age would be 17, becoming 18 in that year. Do I need to stay at the Monash dorm? Or any other accommodation? Or am I free to live where I like?

I think this would be enough for now.

I look forward to your response.
Thanks.

Regards,
Tom

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