[Grammar] Check my short writing please.:)

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yjso21

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His grandmother and parents scolded him when he did something dangerous, because they were worried about him.


Should I use comma or not?

Should I seperated this sentence into two parts?

Please help me!!
 

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His grandmother and parents scolded him when he did something dangerous, because they were worried about him.
The comma is fine, but not essential.
 
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