[General] check the error

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please check the error-:

today i forgot my pocket diary in the training room,that diary is very important for me as it keeps some words which i had been collecting for the last few months.then i called to my trainer and asked did you see my diary in training room,she said no bt i have seen that diary in hand of rohit,then i called to rohit he said i gave your diary to saurabh,finally i found my diary with saurabh,i said him please keep it with you and i will take it tomorrow.
 

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How about some punctuation and appropriate capitalization and resubmit.
 
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