[General] checking of a few sentences 4

[vil]

Dear teacher,

Would you be kind enough to check out the plausibility of the following sentences?

I was going to go to the store, but then I realized we already had some flour.

I was going to make you a cake, but then I remembered that I’m not happy with you.

I don’t care if I’m not invited. I wasn’t going to come anyway.

If you weren’t going to go, then why do you have your shoes on?

I wouldn’t go to that concert if you paid me.

I wasn’t going to go this evening because I’m waiting guests.

We were going to play basketball, but Ivailo should work and Stanislav got ill.

What’s up? Why weren’t you there? I gave you a personal invitation even.

I was going to buy something for her birthday, but I worked up late.

If I was going to have one lev for each brain, which you haven’t …I would have one lev.

Thank you for your efforts.

Regards,

V.

 

[emsr2d2]

Dear teacher,

Would you be kind enough to check out the plausibility of the following sentences?

I was going to go to the store, but then I realized we already had some flour.

I was going to make you a cake, but then I remembered that I’m not happy with you.

I don’t care if I’m not invited. I wasn’t going to come anyway.

If you aren't going to go, then why do you have your shoes on?

I wouldn’t go to that concert if you paid me.

I wasn’t going to go this evening because I’m waiting for guests.

We were going to play basketball, but Ivailo [STRIKE]should[/STRIKE] has to work and Stanislav is ill.

What’s up? Why weren’t you there? I even gave you a personal invitation [STRIKE]even[/STRIKE].

I was going to buy something for her birthday, but I worked [STRIKE]up[/STRIKE] late.

If I was going to have on lev for each brain, which you hadn’t …I would have one lev.

Thank you for your efforts.

Regards,

V.

See my annotations in red. The only one I can't do anything with is the last one, because I don't understand what you mean by it!