[General] checking of four sentences

[vil]

Dear teachers,

Would you be kind enough to edit the following four sentences?

It is way to imagine yourself the impression these words, pronouncing in such a thunderous voice, rendered on a nervous, mystically and exalted boy. It was like a flash of lighting and a clap of thunder. I felt to the ground nd lost conscious…

When I came to me I saw my father and mother bent over me asking a blessing.

Thank you for your efforts.

Regards,

V.

 

[emsr2d2]

Dear teachers,

Would you be kind enough to edit the following four sentences?

It is way to imagine yourself the impression these words, pronouncing in such a thunderous voice, rendered on a nervous, mystically and exalted boy. I'm afraid I can't make any sense of this sentence at all!

It was like a flash of lightning and a clap of thunder. I fell to the ground and lost consciousness…

When I came to, [STRIKE]me[/STRIKE] I saw my father and mother bent over me asking a blessing.

Thank you for your efforts.

Regards,

V.

See above.