[General] checking of three sentences

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vil

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Dear teachers,

Would you be kind enough to revise the following three sentences?

From these early years is not too much left in my memory. A small wooden house, where had lived our family-father, mother and we four brothers. Garden, in which was busy all day with trees and bushes our father who did not belong to us.

Thank you for your efforts.

Regards,

V.
 

savedhamlet554

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Dear teachers,

Would you be kind enough to revise the following three sentences?

---> From these early years THERE is not too much left in my memory. A small wooden house, where our father, OUR mother and THE four OF US brothers HAD LIVED. THE garden, in which OUR FATHER HAD BEEN busy all day CUTTING trees and bushes WHICH did not belong to us.

Thank you for your efforts.

Regards,

V.

SHOULD BE CORRECT AND MAKE SENSE NOW
 
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