Class reunion

[bid213]

Today is Tomb Sweeping Day, only to hold a class reunion.

It has no choice because everyone has free time on this day.

We ate the Thai foods, and then we went to play bowling.

This was the first time I played bowling.

Originally, I thought that playing bowling was very easy, it just roll the bowling ball and strike down the bowling bottle.

However, ths thing is opposite.

When I rolled the ball either went the curved way or went to the gutter.= =

Yet, I sometime strike. Ha Ha.

I found I had the gift.~~

I think I am crazy about playing bowling. ----------------------------------------------------------------------
Can you help me correct or modify it? thanks!

 

[Anglika]

Today is Tomb Sweeping Day, only to hold a class reunion.
Today is Tomb Sweeping Day and we are having a class reunion.

It has no choice because everyone has free time on this day.
It is the best time as everyone is free on this day.

We ate the Thai foods, and then we went to play bowling.
We ate Thai food and then we went bowling.

This was the first time I played bowling.
It is the first time I have been bowling.

Originally, I thought that playing bowling was very easy, it just roll the bowling ball and strike down the bowling bottle.
Originally, I thought it was very easy. You just roll the bowling ball and knock over the skittles.

However, ths thing is opposite.
However, it is just the opposite.

When I rolled the ball either went the curved way or went to the gutter.= =
Whenever I rolled the ball, it either went in a curve or down the gutter.

Yet, I sometime strike. Ha Ha.
Even then I sometimes made a strike. Ha ha!

I found I had the gift.~~
I found I have the gift to bowl well.

I think I am crazy about playing bowling.
I think I am crazy about bowling.
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Can you help me correct or modify it? thanks!

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[bid213]

cool thank you very much