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[Unregistered]

Hi there,

Could you proofread the following sentence?

1. Doing mathematics quizzes will help a person's mind to stay clear and logical.
2. Doing mathematics quizzes will allow a person to have a clear and logical mind.

Thanks
pete

 

[shalstudent]

---Doing Mathematic quizzes will help a person to stay clear and logical in his mind.

 

[peter123]

Hi shalstudent,
It is interesting to read the thread.
So do you think the two sentences of Pete are wrong?

Peter

 

[shalstudent]

Hi Peter,

I am not saying that they are wrong.

Am just stating that they can be put in a better way. Sorry, I should have added the statement in the beginning.