Clive stood up for his colleague, Diana

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I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Is it correct to have a comma after "colleague"?

Clive stood up for his colleague, Diana when others bullied her.
 
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No, a single comma is distracting.

You could add another one after Diana, but I feel that no commas are necessary.
 
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