Clive would see his psychotherapist once a week

[Bassim]

Would you please correct the mistakes in my sentences? Does my second sentence make sense in English?

Clive would see his psychotherapist once a week. After every visit, he would go into a pub and drink a few pints of lager, as if he wanted to wash down his past.

 

[emsr2d2]

I'd use "Clive saw" or "Clive used to see" at the beginning. The modal "would" in the next part is OK. I'd use "to wash away his past".