Clive's holiday was ruined

Bassim

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Are my sentences grammatically correct? I am not sure what particle should be used with "move" in this sentence. Is it correct with "out" or should it be "away."

Clive's holiday was ruined by the cold hotel room. When he complained, the arrogant manager replied that he should move out and find a better hotel. This was the first time in his life Clive wished to smash a man in the face.
 

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"Move out" is okay; "move away" would not work in the above.
 

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I'd use "that he should leave". Also, I'd say "find a different hotel". Unless he was being sarcastic, it's unlikely that the manager would say "a better hotel".

At the end, I'd use "This was the first time in his life that Clive had felt like smashing someone ​in the face".
 
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