comma 2

[MsNyree]

I'm trying to write an introduction speech for communication applications class. I want to know am I placing my comma in the right place.

Thesis statement: I'm here today to share with the audience, Justin Timberlake's accomplishments.

Did I place the common in the right place?

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I plan on telling the audience about his accomplishments.

 

[susiedqq]

I'm here today to share with the audience, Justin Timberlake's accomplishments.

No, that is not correct placement for the comma.

How about:

I'm here to share Justin Timberlake's accomplishments with the audience.

no comma is needed here.