comma 2

Status
Not open for further replies.

MsNyree

Member
Joined
May 13, 2007
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Portuguese
Home Country
Brazil
Current Location
United States
I'm trying to write an introduction speech for communication applications class. I want to know am I placing my comma in the right place.

Thesis statement: I'm here today to share with the audience, Justin Timberlake's accomplishments.

Did I place the common in the right place?



I plan on telling the audience about his accomplishments.
 

susiedqq

Key Member
Joined
Jan 14, 2008
Member Type
Academic
Native Language
English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States
I'm here today to share with the audience, Justin Timberlake's accomplishments.

No, that is not correct placement for the comma.

How about:

I'm here to share Justin Timberlake's accomplishments with the audience.

no comma is needed here.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top