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[Unregistered]

Hi native speakers,
Could you proofread the following comments?

1. I can't see how the points you have mentioned in this paragraph can support you to draw this conclusion.
2. There is no causal relationship between this sentence and its antecedent even though you have used the conjuction 'because'.

thanks
pete

 

[Anglika]

Hi native speakers,
Could you proofread the following comments?

1. I can't see how the points you have mentioned in this paragraph can support you to draw this conclusion. "... can support this conclusion."/"...can lead you to this conclusion."
2. There is no causal relationship between this sentence and its antecedent even though you have used the conjuction 'because'.:up:

thanks
pete

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