Corporation optimal inner communication and thinking is pivotal

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Does it work my attempt to compact the following sentence?

"Company, organization, and /or corporation optimal inner communication and thinking is pivotal." Too blurred?

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Try "Optimal corporate internal communication and thinking are pivotal."
 

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Try "Optimal corporate internal communication and thinking are pivotal."

Thank You, but wha's optimal is the in-house communication and thinking, not the corporate. Is putting "optimal" in the first place affecting all that is following?

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Yes. It is all optimal. Optimal corporate communication, not corporate optimal communication.
 

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However, what do you mean by "optimal thinking"? It's rather vague.
 

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To think in a proper way when it comes to in--house communication, corporate communication

Thank You

However, what do you mean by "optimal thinking"? It's rather vague.
 

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Optimized internal communication and employee engagement are essential.
 
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