correct expressions

[Hanka]

Hello again :-D

could you please tell me which of these is correct or if there is any better phrase:

extend the offer by new products and services
enrich the offer by new products and services
enhance the offer by new products and services
add new products and services in the offer

Thanks a lot!

Hanka

 

[MrPedantic]

Hello Hanka,

I would guess that you want to suggest that an offer of some kind has been made more attractive by the addition of new products and services; in which case:

1. extend the offer by new products and services

— not used.

2. enrich the offer by new products and services

— you would say "enrich...with"; but again, it's not used.

3. enhance the offer by new products and services

— "enhance...with..." might be used.

4. add new products and services in the offer

— you would say "add...to..."; but again, it sounds a little unusual.

Best wishes,

MrP

 

[Hanka]

Thanks a lot! And are there any other options to say this that are commonly used?

 

[MrPedantic]

Hello Hanka,

I'm still not quite sure what the intended context might be; but you could say e.g. that you were expanding your business with new products and services; or that you were offering new products and services to your customers.

All the best,

MrP