CORRECT ME, Please - game

[Mad-ox]

hi world,

I try to come up with another game; I hope it will work!

RULE(s): One member have to post a sentence which is grammatically incorrect,( it has ONE grammar mistake ) and the next member will have to correct it.

THAT'S ALL!

an example:

a member says: The children is playing in the garden.

another member corrects: The children are playing in the garden.


HAVE FUN!


I'll start the game:

The mouse have a piece of cheese. ( Correct me, please )

Madox

 

[banderas]

Here we go

The mouse has a piece of cheese.

My sentence to corect is:
I need some pens so I'll go to stationary.

 

[Mad-ox]

I need some pens so I could go to the stationary.






Its boring to wait for the bus. ( Correct me, please )

 

[stuartnz]

I need some pens so I could go to the stationary.






Its boring to wait for the bus. ( Correct me, please )

It's boring to wait for the bus.

I want too know if you want two come to. ( Correct me, please )

 

[banderas]

I need some pens so I could go to the stationary.






Its boring to wait for the bus. ( Correct me, please )

You did not correct me though, still some mistake in my sentence:roll:

 

[Mad-ox]

NO MORE THAN ONE MISTAKE IN A SENTENCE!!!!!!!!​

 

[Mad-ox]

I want too know if you want two come to. [/COLOR]( Correct me, please )

I want to know if you want to come, too. ( three mistakes: two=to; lack of comma; to=too )


An apple a day keep the doctor away.

 

[beascarpetta]

An apple a day keeps the doctor away.

Between me and my sisters friend there are a lot of bad feelings right now. ;-)

 

[Mad-ox]

Between me and my sister's friend, there are a lot of bad feelings right now.




My girlfriend goed to the library yesterday. ( correct me, please )

 

[beascarpetta]

My girlfriend went to the library yesterday.

I could have met you but the waching machine broke down.(correct me please) ;-)

 

[Mad-ox]

for me the sentence sounds better like this:

I would have met you If the washing machine had not broken down.

regarding your original sentence I think:

I could have met you but the washing machine had broken down. ( at least I hope it is correct )





How many does one lesson cost? ( Correct me, please )

 

[Sandy Bell]

How many does one lesson cost?

I think it will be like that > How much does one lesson cost?
I hope the word (many) it is the mistake :roll:


my sentence:
Did he arrived yesterday morning? [correct me, Please] :lol:

 

[Mad-ox]

much is CORRECT

Did he arrive yesterday morning?



I have eated three apples so far. ( Correct me, please )

 

[shalstudent]

I have eaten three apples so far.

It is rained now. (correct me, please).

 

[Mad-ox]

It is raining now.



Everybody have two eyes. ( Correct me, please )

 

[shalstudent]

Everybody has two eyes.

Pen are mightier than the sword (please correct)

 

[Mad-ox]

Pen is mightier than the sword.



If I was you I would go on a trip. ( correct me, please )

 

[shalstudent]

If I were you, I would go on a trip.

He is the seniorest member here.

 

[Mad-ox]

He is the most senior member here.




There are many informations in this book.

 

[beascarpetta]

There is a lot of information in this book.

Any learners of the English language needs a lot of practice.