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PLZ tell me which part is wrong.

Our age is in many respects that which has little wisdom, and which would therefore profit greatly by what philosophy has to teach.


Thank you so much for answering my question.
 
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It's not bad. (I've seen much worse.) But a little paring might improve it.

How about:
  • Our age in many respects has little wisdom and would therefore profit greatly by what philosophy has to teach.

What do you think?

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