[Grammar] Correct sentence?

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ladyTL

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If he becomes released after 21 years, how is that fair to all his victims and also family of the victims?
 

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If he is released after 21 years, how is that fair to all his victims or the families of the victims?
 

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Or even "...all his victims and their families."
 
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