Correction of Formal letter to request invitation letters

[Jamila2]

I'm xxxxxxxx.
I'm xxxx living in xxxxxx
I graduated from medical laboratory science college lxxxxx university..

I'm interested in Stem Cells researches and conducting aresearch in field of xxxxxx

I'm willing to apply for the xxxx
Scholarship because its honor to me to educate in xxxxxx university which is one of the successful universities on Italy but as I dont have any contact with a professors from xxxx university, I searched the professors contact list found that you are interested in stem cells field which is the same field I interested in..
It's my pleasure to learn from you and your valuable experiences in stem cells field..
I would like to join your research team or attend advanced course cover the topic of xxxxxxx so if you agree please send me an invitation letter that allows me to apply.


Thanks..
Best regards..

 

[teechar]

Hello Jamila2, and welcome to the forum.

Dear Prof Johnson,

[STRIKE]I'm xxxxxxxx.
I'm xxxx living in xxxxxx
[/STRIKE]

I graduated from Medical Laboratory Science College, xxxxx University in 2015.

I'm interested in stem cell research and [STRIKE]conducting aresearch[/STRIKE] also in the field of xxxxxx.

I'm [STRIKE]willing[/STRIKE] very interested in [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] applying for the xxxx Scholarship because [STRIKE]its[/STRIKE] it would be an honor for [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] me to [STRIKE]educate[/STRIKE] study in xxxxxx University, which is one of the most successful Italian universities [STRIKE]on Italy[/STRIKE] in this branch of science. [STRIKE]but as I dont have any contact with a professors from xxxx university, I searched the professors contact list[/STRIKE] I looked at the university's website and found that [STRIKE]you are interested in[/STRIKE] the field of stem cells is also one of your main areas of interest. [STRIKE]field which is the same field I interested in..[/STRIKE]

It would be my pleasure to learn from you and your valuable experience in stem cells, and to conduct research under your guidance. [STRIKE]field..[/STRIKE]

I would like to join your research team and/or attend advanced courses that cover the topic of xxxxxxx, so if you agree, please send me an invitation letter [STRIKE]that allows[/STRIKE] to enable me to apply.

I have attached a copy of my resume for your consideration.

My thanks to you, and I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Jamila Jamil.

[STRIKE]Best regards..[/STRIKE]

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If you have a CV/resume, mention that in your letter. If you don't, take out the line in blue.