Correction Requested(Cecilia's coverletter & resume)

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1905, Building 7
299 WuZhou Street
P.R China

17 October 2004

Mr. Zheng Ni
HR Manager
Unilever China
100 ZunYi Road
P.R China

Dear Mr. Ni

Application for position of the Management Trainee for Marketing

I am writing to express keen interest in the above mentioned position advertised by your company on

Unilever is a successful multinational corporation in fast consuming goods industry, which I am very interested in. If I have the chance to be a management trainee, I would expect this program give me more challenge and training, and it would be a profound start of my business career.

During my period with the ballroom dancing club in the university, most of my work was involved in market planning and implementation. As my resume indicates, I was major in international economics and trade in Sydney Institution of Language and Commerce, Shanghai University. I am familiar with the skills of this position, and I am also capable of business English and office softwares. What is most important is that I am full of enthusiastic to do well in this job, and I have the ability to learn.

Because of my personal character and abilities, I believe I am ideally suited for this position.
For this reason I have enclosed a copy of my resume for your consideration. I can be contracted on 13917164934, and I would be pleased to attend an interview at any time.

Yours sincerely



Room1905, Building 7, Lane 299,
WuZhou Road, Hongkou Area,
Shanghai, PR China
Phone: 65639687 Mobile phone:13917164934
E-mail: ; ;

Seeking a managerial position in marketing department in a multinational corporation.

Summary of Qualifications
·Fluent English, CET-6, CET speaking test B+, intermediate interpretation
·Outstanding score in College computer test level-1(Microsoft office, Windows)
·ERP financial management application expert certificated by UFSOFT Corp. Ltd.
·Standard Mandarin and Shanghainese, excellent literature ability
·Chairperson of ballroom dancing club in the university
·Interpersonal Communication, Planning and organization
·Driving license

Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce, Shanghai University
2005 Shanghai, China
Field of Study International Economics and Trade
Bachelor’s Degree in International Economics and Trade
International Trade Diploma, University of Technology Sydney
Won First Rate Scholarship for three times

Relevant Courses:
Marketing, Accounting, Economics, Organizational Behavior, Financial Management, Business Communication, E-commerce

Sales Research UFSOFT Corp. Ltd, Shanghai China
June, 2004 Business information research and sales

Trade Agent Assistant Shanghai Pharmaceutical Stock Ltd., Shanghai China
June, 2002 Information collection, documents making, Partner connection

Club Chairperson Yeyin Ballroom Dancing Club, Shanghai University
2003 In charge of club of 300 members, manage internal affairs; arrange dancing parties and the communication with other clubs


Staff member
Nov 13, 2002
Member Type
Native Language
British English
Home Country
Current Location
keen interest

I don't like 'keen' here. It doesn't seem necessary; I'd use 'my interest'. ;-)
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