correction

[bieasy]

Hi,

Is the follwing passage correct?

I came to Germany in 2007 and thanks to my good knowledge in English I was soon approached by schools directors that’s how I gradually introduced myself into teaching.

 

[Grumpy]

Hi,

Is the following passage correct?

I came to Germany in 2007 and, thanks to my good knowledge of English, I was soon approached by schools' directors. That’s how I gradually introduced myself into teaching.

See my corrections in red.