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bieasy

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Hi,

Is the follwing passage correct?

I came to Germany in 2007 and thanks to my good knowledge in English I was soon approached by schools directors that’s how I gradually introduced myself into teaching.
 

Grumpy

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Hi,

Is the following passage correct?

I came to Germany in 2007 and, thanks to my good knowledge of English, I was soon approached by schools' directors. That’s how I gradually introduced myself into teaching.


See my corrections in red.
 
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