Correctness of a few sentences

[Offroad]

Dear teachers,

Do these sentences work?

• I believe you can track them knowing their names and appearance.
• I thought this info was available to all involved.
• The company I work for is hiring new talents.
• The boss asked the attendant to gather the names and ages of all employees so he can decide who will travel.
• I would like you to reconsider your opinion on this matter.

Thank you

 

[SlickVic9000]

(Not a Teacher)

"New talents" in your third sentence should not be plural. Everything else looks all right.

 

[Offroad]

I thought 'new talents' could replace 'talented people'. Could you explain why?

Thank you

 

[SlickVic9000]

(Not a Teacher)

Perhaps you could try thinking of it as a collective noun.

 

[Offroad]

Terrific.
As for the particle 'to' in the second sentence. I wonder if 'for' alone would work there too.

I thought this info was available for all involved.

and possibly accompanied:

I thought this info was available for all involved to follow.

Thank you

 

[SlickVic9000]

(Not a Teacher)

1) You could.

2) I don't get the "to follow" part, though. It would make more sense if it were "instructions" instead of "information".