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smee1
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Dear teacher,
Would you correct this sentence? It is part of a work I have to do for my oral exam and I don't know why it sounds odd.
"She said she would've genetically engineered her daughters if she had been able to do so. She would've liked them to be slimmer, taller and as intelligent as science could have done."
Thank you.
Regards
Jorge
Would you correct this sentence? It is part of a work I have to do for my oral exam and I don't know why it sounds odd.
"She said she would've genetically engineered her daughters if she had been able to do so. She would've liked them to be slimmer, taller and as intelligent as science could have done."
Thank you.
Regards
Jorge