Could you help me to find a mistake in this sentence?

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Shally Stanley, a managing director in McLean, is certain consultants work from home, but only after they have a proven track record because some of them lose focus.
 

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Shally Stanley, a managing director in McLean, is certain that consultants work from home, but only after they have a proven track record because some of them lose focus.

Context would help, but I don't really see any "mistake" in the sentence, except perhaps it might read better with "that" as indicated.
 

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Context would help, but I don't really see any "mistake" in the sentence, except perhaps it might read better with "that" as indicated.

I have an original sentence:
At technology-consulting firm Acumen Solutions Inc., certain consultants work from home, but only after "they have a proven track record," said Shally Stanley, a managing director in its McLean, Va., office.
 

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Saying that "certain consultants" work from home is not the same as reporting that someone said he is "certain that consultants work from home."
 

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Thank you!:-D
 
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