Could you please correct the following sentence

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Annecy

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1. This is to inform you that Mr. Avinash is staying at Flat 18, Bldg XXX, Road 16, Thane -4.

2. Please note that do not park your car over the manhole cover, and the one is already been
broken.
 
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Horsa

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Assuming the address is correctly given the first sentence is perfect.

Please do not park your car over the manhole cover as one has already been
broken in this way.
 
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