Hi!
I'm applying for an internship position. I'm not sure if this paragraph is ok like this and I would be very grateful if somebody could correct it. Thank you in advance!
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Having this background, the XXX Programme seems highly attractive to me. An internship with XXX would provide me with the opportunity to learn more about security issues on the African continent. Most important, it would enable me to do so in an organisation in which Africa really takes the lead in promoting peace.
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I'm applying for an internship position. I'm not sure if this paragraph is ok like this and I would be very grateful if somebody could correct it. Thank you in advance!
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Having this background, the XXX Programme seems highly attractive to me. An internship with XXX would provide me with the opportunity to learn more about security issues on the African continent. Most important, it would enable me to do so in an organisation in which Africa really takes the lead in promoting peace.
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