David experienced true love

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

David experienced true love first in his seventies. He thought that now when love had come too late it would have been better if it had not come at all. Half a century ago, he would have been overjoyed, but now he felt a pathetic old man.
 

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Put a comma after "late" and change "ago" to "before".
 

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A suggestion;

David first experienced true love in his seventies. He thought that now that love had come too late...
 
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