David saw his former schoolmate Marco

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

David saw his former schoolmate Marco crossing the street and called out his name, but Marco didn't take any notice. "Of course, he doesn't want to see me, now when he is a CEO," David thought, watching Marco in his pinstripe suit disappearing in the crowd.
 

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I would say "into the crowd".
 

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It's now that he's a CEO.
 
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