David switched his shift

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Is it correct to write "switch his shift"?

David switched his shift with one of his colleagues so that David could go and watch a football match.
 

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I'd write David switched shifts with one of his colleagues so he could go watch a football match.
 

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It sounds much better with one David.
 

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Or:
"David swapped shifts with ..."
 

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Without repeating 'David', it's not clear which of them was going to the match, unless you recast the sentence.

'Wanting to go to a football match, David swapped shifts with a colleague.'
 

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I would interpret it as meaning that David was going to the match, which seems the natural choice. If the colleague went, I would rephrase the sentence.
 
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