dear all,

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nahednazzal

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dear all,

kindly note my following comments on red

1- a financal propsal has been requested through ammal as we deal.
2- amal will contacted the high tech company asking about our stocks, to be changed to emv crads .

3-we ask for unioning the vendor and to be under futhure company umberlla as we note from emp.
 

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I will say the same thing I said in reply to your first post.

In written English, we have rules about capitalisation and punctuation.

- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with a single punctuation mark.
- Start every proper noun (like "Amal") with a capital letter.
- Acronyms are usually capitalised - E.M.V.

"Crads" is not a word. "Emp" is not a word. "Financal" is not a word. "Propsal" is not a word. "Unioning" is not a word. "Futhure" is not a word. "Umberlla" is not a word.

You have not written any words in red, so your first full sentence makes no sense.
 

mayita1usa

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Also, in the subject line of your posts, you must put the topic of your question, not "dear all".
Thanks.
 
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